Th5 Daily Tzr Mrs! 3 Leaven reviews (?(? 6 n i 7.7 v y ! I irii rill IV li If Iff I Mi iiii iisLbil Vi i y Tuesday. Msrch 23, 1971 7 7? I hope I can be excused for noting the appearance of the new Carolina Quarterly (Winter, 1971) with something less than rejoicing. At least I'm sure the average reader will excuse" my reserve? Tile Quarterly is a much-honored small magazine. Recently it received a matching grant from the Coordinating Council of Literary Magazines. Yet I suspect most readers will respond to this as they would to news that a stranger had just got a gold star for achievement in Latin. And I'm afraid the reaction of "most readers" is in this case correct. This Quarterly, like, well, like all the earlier ones I've seen, has a certain, solipsistic quality, a tendency to cater to tastes rather too refined; or perhaps rareified is the word. And yet, not to be all one-sided, there are poems in this volume (leaving aside the prose) which overcome the almost mannered self-consciousness of most of the collection and pulse with life. I can't advise anyone to buy the Quarterly; but if you can get hold of a copy, browse through. You won't be entirely displeased. Perhaps the most noticeable quality of the Quarterly's poetry, besides its Wkfk . ta by Sandy Hunt Special to the DTH For the students who came together in the Advanced Creative Writing course, "In Paintbrush Canyon" is " . . . our gentle need to reach." But "In Paintbrush Canyon" is more than the need to reach; it is even more than the reaching itself. It is the reach touching. Beyond, behind, within their own experience these poets reach cut into experience and make it their own, then give it back to us-remembered, . related and reclaimed -in their poems. "In Paintbrush Canyon," everything is human, even the echoes. The cover stares at us: wonderful photo by Chris Jones that captures the feel of poetry perfectly: ' exposure. The words talk to us. They do not decline; they only relate, one to the other. The poems themselves are all about making meanings human meanings. And human meanings (a Will 'Trash arrive some day? "Trash", which will one day open in Pfipel HW-tia$rtiic tee stilni to emergerom: the WafTiol f Factory It- isi noteworthy because of director Paul Morrissey's keen visual sense. But then too, one cannot lightly discount Joe Dallesandro's skills as an actor.. Joe Dallesandro, then 17, joined -CORRECTION-WANT A RUSH TRYAvVATERBED CALL 942-3050 THIS IS THE CORRECT NUMBER . The Daily Tar 5 PSSns Board dally except Sunday. ?1 6 exaStion periods, vacations and :: :: summer Deriods. university ot North Carolina siuaeni summer periods. Offices are at the Student : Union $ balding, Unfv, of North Carolina Chapel Hill, N. C. 27S14elephone .x numbers: .' News. 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I'm the last person to deny the importance of description to poetry; but sometimes the drive for solidity is almost suffocating. This is particularly true of Robert Hefner's rather unagfle contributions. In "The Last Lighthouse," he writes: "But still I scan that slate-gray sea, searching for a pulsing vein of jade that beacons from the crested rocks." It's unfair to the poem to quote lines out of their context; and in "The Last Lighthouse" the antithesis between living light and the dead sea is sustained. Yet, with such a mass of description, why the unnecessary "crested rocks"? And "pulsing vein of jade", besides its flatness of sound, rams home its meaning with a sledge-hammer's delicacy. I might note also that "jade" seems improper in the poem's decorum. The heavy hand is apparent in Hefner's other poems, also. "Shift of Key", is a series of unconvincing images linked by a pun "Auricle, Ventricle, Canticle." And "The Biology Teacher Dreams of Adultery," Hefner's most effective effort, collapses into incoherence as one image is tie amy!! distinction we can no longer take for granted) are matters of human relationships. So that's finally what the poems are about. "In Paintbrush Canyon" very appropriately opens with David Feffer's "Growing Up." A beautiful poem which takes us inside the head of a child, right back inside our own child heads, to re-experience smallness and trust. Cae Emerson's "Occupant" is a wonderfully sensitive and sensitized response to isolation: the isolation of a respondent from his own response the dehumanization of human response in a world where structures act by proxy for relationships. Her terms: the anonymity of suffering as it relates to the suffering of anonymity. Becca Lemon's "The Gregarious Loner" is a perfectly realized portrait and at the same time a marvelous dramatization of a mood that is as much our province as the old man's, "in E major" by Jim Warm is great: so finely Warhol in 1967, appearing in "Loves of dndineV 'Lonesome Cowboys"; ""San Diego Surf' and "mesh";'nis-fifst starring role under Morrissey's direction. He has been described as "A man of a thousand faces, a thousand nuances, expressing a world of emotion within the framework of his low-key characterization." "Trash" is earning soon. Maybe? 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Lamprey 2 Exist 3 Bartered 4 Food program 5 Finish Distr. by Uaited Cl lN. Dil Hrr. Hm9pm I invalidated by the next (a mirror is "torn," for instance). Worse, the poem's ambiguity is entirely unproductive: we never grasp what we have to know to make sense out of the images: whose consciousness is the subject of the poem, the teacher's or her husband's? In Rush Rankin's "Visiting a Governness" we see another instance of poorly handled imagery. The subject of the poem is a sexual encounter between the poet and the governess. The first stanza describes the afterglow: "The white sheet stuck to my legs like foam that eshausted waves leave fluttering on the beach." One sees the rationale behind "exhausted" and behind the situation as a whole. Yet, sheets are in no way like foam, and foam does not "flutter." I apppreciate Mr. Rankin's predicament; I don't know what word I'd substitute for "flutter." On these grounds one may excuse the poem's imprecision, as one excuses vagueness in a politician's speech or a sermon; I am a pedant, perhaps, even to call attention to it. Yet, one tolerates such obviously failed description description which must bear the weight of the poem's sense only because one o tuned that not a single word jars. The whole poem simply rings true: a song. "Look" by Ann Odum is a wonderful poem. A perfectly timed click of the shutter; a moment she'll never forget -because that moment is her whole life. The collection closes with Kip Ward's "Harmony School." A beautiful way to conclude, at the starting line. And no races either; just parades. "Harmony School" is about learning how to see harmony inside ourselves and out. Joining up with the parade. Drawings by Lynn Goodpasture provide the finishing touch: dancing lines and dots celebrating the parade, lighting the way out of town. "In Paintbrush Canyon" is an experience well worth making your own. 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Lines Eke, "With the masters of the house away, she had invited me to stay" testily to an absence of narrative power on the poet's part. Too many poems are written with similar incompetence to - worry about them aH. David Gitin's "No Tide" is painfully- precious: "firefly villages on openface hills night ..." I suppose Vaughan Duhamel is an "experimental"' poet. How else are we to account for lines like "say what you want to tell me something as i can know you from some basis besides going to a direction"? And Judith Anne Greenberg's "Agreement" is a particularly impotent accumulation of "pathetic" details, so unoriginal in Camm Due to fire and rain and smoke the Quiz Bowl will be held if the Union Building is open. If the building is closed the Quiz Bowl will resume Monday, April 5. New schedules will be available at the Union Information Desk as soon as possible. The Christian Science Organization will meet at 6:30 tonight at the Wesley Foundation. All are welcome. There will be a special meeting of the UNC Young Republicans Club tonight. This is a very important meeting concerning club business and every member is urged to attend. The meeting will be held at7:30in 112 Saunders. Draft counseling: Monday through Thursday, 3-5 and 7-9 p.m. Suite C, Carolina Union. REG. $5.98 J VERDI REQUIEM SUTHERLAND HORNE PAVARCTTI TALVELA THE VIENNA PHILHARMONIC ORCHESTRA GEORGSOLTI W 1 the music of Erik Satie THE VELVET GENTLEMAN dmarata Contemporary Ctambv Group 4 C.RK-VT RJll'st)II HRtRtlUTR 10A.M.-10P.M. MON-SAT LOMDOM CLASSIC l . MY' r mm conception that I am surprised to see it in print. Not everything, however, is quite on a dead level. I criticized Rush Rankin severely, so let me note that "Not Because I was Stir Crazy" is a terrifically exciting poem. It describes a fatal auto crash: "From my position, my scream was bloodcurdling: veins snapped like, rubberbands, lungs flattened against my brain. (Let there be no mistake, dying hurts.)" Michael Culross's "Kor.g's Girl" is something of a conversation-piece for the female liherationists, but it is powerful and effective. And Greg Kuzma's "The American Agency" to my mind is the best poem in the collection: "We can cure your aches And cure your sagging alphabet And cure your Angst. Cure the darkness that gathers like thieves Around your back porch stoop. We have httleinedicines for your ill at r c Former members of and anyone else interested-Jn the Experiment in International Living are asked to contact Miss Anne Queen in her office in the Y-Building or phone her there at 933-2333. Please phone before spring break as plans are being made for a publicity day for the Experiment. Donations are requested for the Campus Chest Auction to be held April 8. Students, residence colleges, fraternities, sororities and any organizations, groups or individuals are asked to bring their items to the APO office, Smith Building, before spring break or call 933-1044 or 933-3996. College Life-Dr. Jim Engle, marketing professor at Ohio State. University, author of six text books on consumer motivation ENTIRE CLASSICAL INVENTORY ON NOW ' ONLY YEP as Pi m GioooriDAiyw V f ill ill V' ' ''."IV ,' 1 n ft N II laS V- ; M sjl'l j.f v. If f r -f i.j -1 1 Oii1 J; 1 I. l I I ... , -.LU..., , 11,1, ...III , .,.1 (jiiiiiMitoiiiiiiiiaii f r ease." It is perhaps curious that Kuina is ZS2XW the orJv cost Li the Quarterly who consistently traditional utilizes many of the devices with poetic effectiveness and ease, and without showine If the Quarterly contained these three poems only, and nothing besides, I would tell the reader to buy it. But frankly, no one likes to pay for a botched job; and my only advice is this, to the magazine's editors: that the best poetry has almost invariably been communication on a large scale. Perhaps modern poetry disproves this assertion. But then, "poetic" merits aside, Byron was a figure cf European significance, and IS. Eliot, as a man, was something of an imaginary toad in a real garden. This is a fact worth considering when you start looking for readers. and head of the faculty division of Campus Crusade for Christ, will be speaking tonight on the subject: "Solution: Spiritual Revolution." The meeting will be held in the faculty lounge on the fourth floor of Dey Hall at 9 p.ra. Nominations for Valkyries of any junior or senior woman student may be made now. Forms are available at the Union Information Desk when it re-opens. Nominations should be turned in to Box 47,. Student Union, no later than April 5. Dr. William Lancaster, pastor of First Baptist Church of Decatur, Georgia will speak on "Beyond Command" tonight at 7:30 at the University Baptist Church, Columbia at Franklin. Everyone is invited. MSA I :i Lira SALE 4 ? r u 7 1 BEETHOVEN I . - TP.M.-10P.M. SUNDAY 1 iH,